Wednesday 12 April 2017

Flash Fiction - Unbelievable (part two)

This week's 100 word story using the following picture prompt

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson



Unbelievable (part two) 

*note - although this can be read as a standalone piece, it goes alongside this original piece Unbelievable

The Detective shook his head, he didn’t get it. Two missing people in a matter of weeks. He inspected the evidence – unfinished pizza, a bottle of red, tell-tale single glass. Beauty clutter on the dressing table, a torch, a watch neatly placed.  Why would anyone eat in the bedroom when they had a balcony with views people paid good money for?

‘You been drinking Marion? When are you going to learn?’

Marion could scarcely breathe in the closet, barely audible her muffled cries letting him know of her existence. She watched, despairing as he left. Here we go again.

Hope you enjoyed it!
Bettina x

With thanks to Rochelle for another great picture prompt - if you wish read more stories using this prompt - click here

4 comments:

  1. Oh no! Hope he comes back and gives the place a more thorough search before it's too late! Nice story.

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  2. She needs a new deceive, one who would smell her out. May I suggest Sherlock.😉

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  3. Not the best of detectives, if he didn't check the closet... ;-)

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  4. the detective is an embarrassment to his profession. when is he going to learn, indeed.

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