tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post4164810599358887959..comments2023-06-07T12:19:10.213+01:00Comments on BeautySwot: Flash Fiction - About Last NightBettina@BeautySwothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10083610184683690471noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-43189865460749525682018-05-27T20:41:26.639+01:002018-05-27T20:41:26.639+01:00I thought it was vandals...then found out it was C...I thought it was vandals...then found out it was Chloe. Yikes! Good job.Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-43212275130749683022018-05-25T11:08:52.114+01:002018-05-25T11:08:52.114+01:00Very vivid story. Chloe has some explaining to do,...Very vivid story. Chloe has some explaining to do, I think, Jilly, Sugar on the Bee.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-51857460705793276332018-05-24T09:25:42.014+01:002018-05-24T09:25:42.014+01:00Kids! They have so little respect for parents'...Kids! They have so little respect for parents' property sometimes. Well written.Clare Hempsteadhttps://clarehempstead.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-77525246291494874552018-05-24T08:26:53.468+01:002018-05-24T08:26:53.468+01:00Someone has some explaining to do! Nice one Bettin...Someone has some explaining to do! Nice one Bettina<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.net/" rel="nofollow">Click to read my FriFic tale</a>Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-85974979918299452482018-05-24T02:04:41.872+01:002018-05-24T02:04:41.872+01:00Wonderfully put together.Wonderfully put together.lisarey1990@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623626767963831246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-55346622297316559772018-05-24T00:49:10.388+01:002018-05-24T00:49:10.388+01:00One of your best, Bettina. Very well done. One of your best, Bettina. Very well done. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-73313124629207102302018-05-23T22:19:46.828+01:002018-05-23T22:19:46.828+01:00I wonder what did happen.I wonder what did happen.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-75277512490155140662018-05-23T20:08:27.281+01:002018-05-23T20:08:27.281+01:00Well written, Bettina. You make the loss and damag...Well written, Bettina. You make the loss and damage feel personal. You create a sense of desecration about the damage, because the house is the narrator's sanctuary. Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-86335532563063172702018-05-23T15:13:54.008+01:002018-05-23T15:13:54.008+01:00Chloe is in big trouble - incidently my daughter i...Chloe is in big trouble - incidently my daughter is a Chloe - I may shout this exact line in years to come! :-)Iain Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08985628484548823345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-58047255543949883552018-05-23T15:04:20.046+01:002018-05-23T15:04:20.046+01:00It's funny how many stories about domestic (or...It's funny how many stories about domestic (or other) violence have been inspired by this simple image.Jameshttps://poweredbyrobots.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2819267004410198346.post-55061812291064463892018-05-23T13:51:08.429+01:002018-05-23T13:51:08.429+01:00Dear Bettina,
The thought of the bowl with a cra...Dear Bettina, <br /><br />The thought of the bowl with a crack in it leaves me feeling sick, too. Then you turned the story on its head with the last line. Well done. <br /><br />Shalom,<br /><br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.com